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Aaron Parker
7 months ago

There are quite a few grammatical errors, but not overly distracting to the overall story. It seems to get lost in the middle there, attempting to build up Yol’s character and experience to justify where the story is going to go.

There are perhaps local references that don’t translate well into other cultures, but that should not be a preventative to explore what is being offered in this story.

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Caius Corvinus
2 years ago

Nice build up to story and description of character and setting. Unusual story but interesting

3 stars so far

Jade Hamilton
2 years ago

Very atmospheric: I look forward to reading the rest.

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