Julies Initiation
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PROLOGUE
Julie is a highly successful account manager. She and her partner Mike have a very open relationship and they work and play hard, together and with others. When Julie meets Mia at an exercise class they hit it off straight away and one thing leads to another and another.
What Julie doesn't know is that this was no chance encounter and she's being groomed to join The Ring.
Will she take the chance?
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Nice STORY
Limiting the purpose of writing the story to present (lesbian) sexual scenes makes it technically weak. Its classification becomes closer to erotic works and not literary work, which should be characterized by a human and dramatic dimension, even if it contains explicit and crude sexual scenes.
I think the writer could do better if she thought of writing a literary work rather than a purely erotic work because she has the tools of writing and storytelling that she can use to produce a more powerful work than this.