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Doing good so far. Keep it up 🙂

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John Ador
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I love the story, there was a part, one character confused me, but all good. Try to check out for that character’s misplacement though

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Thomas Coghlan
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What a twist at the end!

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travis masonheimer
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i want to edit all the errors…

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“What’s the matter, Sweetie,” Ann Ryan asked her son, Tommy. “You haven’t touched your breakfast.” Tommy didn’t answer; he just idly poked at his pancakes with his fork, a sour expression on his face. “You need to eat before you go to school,” Ann gently chided.

With a speed and a fury Ann wouldn’t have thought possible, Tommy suddenly drove his fork into her outstretched hand. She screamed, and Tommy laughed. Then, in a voice that wasn’t his own, he stated, “Tommy doesn’t live here anymore, Mrs. Ryan.”

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Page 1 : Sean noticed two things about the Ryan house as soon as the front door opened. The first was the set Details 00:06:00
Page 2 : Sean was disappointed when he first looked inside Tommy’s room. He’d expected the temperature to be Details 00:06:00
Page 3 : The hand pouring Sean’s coffee shook so hard he thought Ann would scald him. Nonetheless, she held i Details 00:00:00
Page 4 : Sean’s hands shook as he turned the doorknob on Tommy’s door and entered the boy’s room. Everything Details 00:06:00
Page 5 : Ann sat on the floor just outside Tommy’s bedroom, looking up at Sean. One eye had rolled skyward, w Details 00:06:00
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Fiona Wright
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Doing good so far. Keep it up 🙂

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John Ador
John Ador
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I love the story, there was a part, one character confused me, but all good. Try to check out for that character’s misplacement though

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Thomas Coghlan
Thomas Coghlan
8 months ago

What a twist at the end!

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travis masonheimer
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7 months ago

i want to edit all the errors…

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