Readers token 
- FREE
- UNLIMITED ACCESS
- A - Top Rated
Donate Please login for donation
Love the story? Donate to support the writer.
Short Story
Prologue
The Old Vicarage, Little Chester was an early 1900s Arts and Crafts house with deep red brickwork and high gable ends with decorated brick patterns. It stood on a raised terrace overlooking a garden that led down to the river. This was a perfect house, almost something the National Trust would consider taking over and opening to the public so why wasn’t it selling?
This was Juliette’s chance to get into house selling. It was the perfect house, all she needed was the perfect family
Read this storyStory content
| Page 1 : Another Monday, another week. Juliette walked into the estate agency office with her usual sense of Details | 00:05:00 | ||
| Page 2 : After arranging the cleaner and gardener and going home to change into jeans, sweatshirt and trainer Details | 00:04:00 | ||
| Page 3 : The rest of the house was in the same shape as the living room. It looked like the family had simply Details | 00:05:00 | ||
| Page 4 : The house seemed warmer and more welcoming as Juliette bustled about. Details | 00:06:00 | ||
| Page 5 : On the Sunday, she again arrived early to set the house up. The geraniums were looking well past the Details | 00:06:00 |
Donate Please login for donationLove the story? Donate to support the writer
Nice story
The ending gave me a slight chill. Nicely done.
The story is good in general.
Its events are coherent and its open ending makes the reader at the peak of thrillers.
Despite the obvious affected of the writer through thrillers, horror, and mystery films, especially the movie (The Others), she presented a beautiful story that expresses her independent character in writing.
But I think Some condensation would have added some kind of artistic value to the story.
Despite this, I think as I said, it is so good that we salute the writer for her outstanding work.
I enjoyed this story. It is a well-written piece.
A beautiful story, enjoyed reading it. Skillfully penned. Seemed like an enchanted house. One of the positives of the piece. Write more about it.
Related Stories
To Lift the Veil
Love the story? Donate to support the writer
Nice story
The ending gave me a slight chill. Nicely done.
The story is good in general.
Its events are coherent and its open ending makes the reader at the peak of thrillers.
Despite the obvious affected of the writer through thrillers, horror, and mystery films, especially the movie (The Others), she presented a beautiful story that expresses her independent character in writing.
But I think Some condensation would have added some kind of artistic value to the story.
Despite this, I think as I said, it is so good that we salute the writer for her outstanding work.
I enjoyed this story. It is a well-written piece.
A beautiful story, enjoyed reading it. Skillfully penned. Seemed like an enchanted house. One of the positives of the piece. Write more about it.