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It started off promising in the narrow escape, with lovely dscription of the harsness of the rain. then it seemed to have lost the connection that the story started with.

Maybe merge the events simultaneous at the same time on the same page to bring more tension. Just seemed a bit too spread out rather then focuses on that part more.

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Just as update Yes a really well written story about the characters and nice description. Sorry forget to view full information on the pages.

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A entertaining read well put together, lovely work

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The Heir

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Hi everyone.

I am excited to write this amazing story that’ll inspire and entertain you.

Please endeavor to comment as the story progresses and support in any way you can.

Love you guys.

This story is about a prince who lost everything at birth. He was raised in a far distant land, far from his own people and kingdom. He grew up with no ambition for greatness, but fate would not be silent.

Join me in this journey and discover how Michael discovered and as well recovered his long-lost identity.

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Page 1 : The Narrow Escape I Details 00:05:00
Page 2 : She stepped out into a walkway and observed the environment for a while. Details 00:06:00
Page 3 : He quickly unstrapped the leather belt around his waist and let out the urine. Details 00:06:00
Page 4 : The entire passengers on this ship were ordered to stand by. And they did. They had no other choice Details 00:06:00
Page 5 : “I will not hesitate to kill you all if I eventually find them on this ship. I will only give you Details 00:04:00
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It started off promising in the narrow escape, with lovely dscription of the harsness of the rain. then it seemed to have lost the connection that the story started with.

Maybe merge the events simultaneous at the same time on the same page to bring more tension. Just seemed a bit too spread out rather then focuses on that part more.

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Caius Corvinus
Caius Corvinus
8 months ago

Just as update Yes a really well written story about the characters and nice description. Sorry forget to view full information on the pages.

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8 months ago

A entertaining read well put together, lovely work

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Say 4 stars for that, rating not working.

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