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Imemesi oghenewoma
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1 year ago

Bravo!
I never saw that coming indeed. Truth be told, many have been a victim.Plus the nature of the story does make me feel at home, I can relate:)
LOL

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Caius Corvinus
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1 year ago

Another unusual book, an interesting read

3 stars again

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Charles Ray
Charles Ray
4 months ago

Interesting story.

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Ahmed Kamal Zaki
Ahmed Kamal Zaki
2 months ago

The story in general is good.. and the narration is good, although the plot needs to be revised.. as a reader, I expected the end of the story and the end came exactly as I expected it, and this is a technical defect in any literary work.
Also, the last sentence is direct and does not good as the end of a story.

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Grade: A - Top Rated 18 members reading

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Out of peer pressure and life demands, I am forced to go out of my way to ensure that I fit in the society of the successful South Sudanese Youth. In my quest to finding a better life that is socially accepted, I am caught up in a global fraud that expose me and the practice to the general public of wannabe’s.

I hope this story, apart from making you laugh, teaches a thing or two about being a person of your own principles as well as decisions.

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Imemesi oghenewoma
Imemesi oghenewoma
1 year ago

Bravo!
I never saw that coming indeed. Truth be told, many have been a victim.Plus the nature of the story does make me feel at home, I can relate:)
LOL

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Caius Corvinus
Caius Corvinus
1 year ago

Another unusual book, an interesting read

3 stars again

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Charles Ray
Charles Ray
4 months ago

Interesting story.

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Ahmed Kamal Zaki
Ahmed Kamal Zaki
2 months ago

The story in general is good.. and the narration is good, although the plot needs to be revised.. as a reader, I expected the end of the story and the end came exactly as I expected it, and this is a technical defect in any literary work.
Also, the last sentence is direct and does not good as the end of a story.

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