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Ahmed Kamal Zaki
Ahmed Kamal Zaki
1 year ago

A touching tragic story… Personally, I would have hoped for a happy ending… But the author’s will surpasses the reader’s will!!
But I think that the author needs to review pages 3 and 4 because there is a problem with arranging the events… especially in the part about Agatha’s talk to the husband about the message that she asked it from Cindy:
“I asked your wife to help me write a letter to my husband”… 
But in general, the story is beautiful and moving.

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Jade Hamilton
Jade Hamilton
10 months ago

A very realistic portrait of a family imploding. Incredible stuff!xx

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Everlyne Nyambuga
Everlyne Nyambuga
9 months ago

The story is well narrated and its enjoyable to read

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Agbeotu Epeni Birinemughan
Agbeotu Epeni Birinemughan
5 months ago

The story is fantastic to real life. Most time men ask for divorce because their partner is not attractive to them again as before. And their characters..

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Lance Luka
Lance Luka
2 months ago

Even me I will hate my father if he put my mum through pain

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 Nick and Cindy have been married for ten years. Their marriage is blessed with a daughter, Joyce. After celebrating their ten years marriage anniversary, four days later, Nick wants a divorce. All efforts by Cindy to get the reason for the divorce is abortive, with Nick claiming she knows the reason, confused, Cindy refuses to sign the papers. All attempts by Nick to kick Cindy out is useless. Chaos creeps into a once happy family of three when Nick brings home another woman whom the daughter adores. Joyce now hates his mother for putting her father through so much pains. What will happen to Cindy? How will Cindy find out her fault? What will happen to this family?

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Ahmed Kamal Zaki
Ahmed Kamal Zaki
1 year ago

A touching tragic story… Personally, I would have hoped for a happy ending… But the author’s will surpasses the reader’s will!!
But I think that the author needs to review pages 3 and 4 because there is a problem with arranging the events… especially in the part about Agatha’s talk to the husband about the message that she asked it from Cindy:
“I asked your wife to help me write a letter to my husband”… 
But in general, the story is beautiful and moving.

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Jade Hamilton
Jade Hamilton
10 months ago

A very realistic portrait of a family imploding. Incredible stuff!xx

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Everlyne Nyambuga
Everlyne Nyambuga
9 months ago

The story is well narrated and its enjoyable to read

2
Agbeotu Epeni Birinemughan
Agbeotu Epeni Birinemughan
5 months ago

The story is fantastic to real life. Most time men ask for divorce because their partner is not attractive to them again as before. And their characters..

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Lance Luka
Lance Luka
2 months ago

Even me I will hate my father if he put my mum through pain

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