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PROLOGUE

“Princess,” he whispers, making my cheeks turn pink. “I know you most likely hate me because I left, so I’m sorry for what I’m about to do.”

My eyes widen as I realize a little bit too late. He presses his lips to mine in a burst of passion from the anticipation, one hand sliding up from my waist and into my hair. He sucks on my bottom lip lightly, and my body un-tenses, my fears flying away, and my muscles relaxing.

“M-Matt-” I pull away, my conscience hitting me hard. He left me… I can’t just let him-

“Shush.” he murmurs, pulling me back to him, prying my lips apart and deepening the kiss, making me moan softly. The space between our bodies becomes nonexistent as he pushes me up against the cave wall, pressing his body to mine. He pins my hands against the wall and his lips make their way along my jawline softly, making my eyes flutter closed in ecstasy.

“Matt-” I whimper. “Sweetheart, I can only tear myself away from you for so long…” he mutters, burying his face in my neck, kissing the sweet spot he discovered a while ago, and making me moan involuntarily.

I sigh, and we lie down on the ground. “You don’t have to anymore…” I whisper with tears in my eyes.

“I know, sweetheart.” he wraps his arms around me, holding me close. “I know.”

***

Raia Farrell has lived in Oakwood for a few years. Her new neighbor, Matthew Monahan, instantly fell in love with her. She started to like him, as years passed, their friendship evolved into something else… When Matthew goes away for a few months, her feelings fade, and they grow apart…

They’ve learned to live with each other again, and kind of maintain the relationship of “acquaintances”…

One day, Raia’s car won’t start, and she needs to go to the bank. What happens when they’re in an armed robbery, get shot, and possibly…don’t make it..?

Will they go beyond death?

 

Content

Chapter 1
Page 1 Distraction free read mode 00:07:00
Page 2 Distraction free read mode 00:05:00
Chapter 2
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Story Reviews

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  1. Profile photo of Claudia White

    Suspense!

    This is incredible! 😀 I love the dynamic between Raia and Matt, they’re a very interesting pair. That cliffhanger has got me wanting more! Can’t wait for more, Mia. One thing though, I think it would be better and neater if you could maybe separate the dialogues when changing characters into two paragraphs. I think it’s better for the reader’s visuals. Other than this technical thing, this story is off to a great start!

  2. Profile photo of Charles Ray

    An exploration of what happens when we die, but love goes on

    A fascinating story. My only comments are the excessive use of capital letters, especially with speech tags like ‘shouted,’ or ‘screamed,’ and the way the different character sections are introduced. The tags convey the emotions adequately, so the capitals are distracting and unnecessary. A little more space between each character would help old readers like me follow with a bit more ease. These are, however, just my personal predilections.

    I like the way the story is built up. The reader is kept in suspense as the character becomes aware of her situation. You’ve got a good thing going here.

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